Mostly from an Instapundit open thread:
Pardon the poor English: "crackheads" is a closed compound word, and I'd put an Oxford comma after "85 prisons":
Here, too—"pipeline" is a closed compound word, and "who's" should be "whose":
Ellipsis = 3 dots, not 2:
Pretty much what I think:
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