Friday, August 12, 2022

rewrite this shitty sentence

Several things wrong here. Rewrite the following sentence (found at rightie site ZeroHedge) and stop my eyes from bleeding:

It began to accelerate in the early years of the 21st century, and while it was always driven by left-wing, liberal, impulses, who seemed to have the upper hand in culture and media; they still always feigned powerlessness and victimhood.

Rescue me!

UPDATE: the "it" at the beginning of the sentence refers to political correctness, the precursor to wokeness, which is what the article is about.



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