Sunday, March 23, 2025

fix the punctuation

And be sure to explain your edits:

There were parts of the story that would always remain obscure, unless Angus Thermopyle explained them; and he refused.


4 comments:

  1. There were parts of the story that would always remain obscure unless Angus Thermopyle explained them, and he refused.

    Because Grammarly told me so.

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  2. I guess my $10,000 check goes to Grammarly, then, since it did all the legwork. But not yet: did it explain the edits? (Read the instructions, please!)

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  3. There were... PARTS of the story that... would always remain--obscure. Unless Angus Thermopyle exPLAINed, them. And... he refused.

    Explanation: Shatner

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