Just read the following:
California, which is in a state of perpetually self-inflicted drought, restricts all sorts of practical water solutions based they would hurt some living creature somewhere.
This hurts my brain. Please leave a comment with an improved version of this sentence.
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After based, add: on the belief that
ReplyDeleteI like it. Simple. Direct. When I asked ChatGPT to make the sentence less awkward, it rewrote a lot of it:
ReplyDelete"California, caught in a perpetual self-inflicted drought, restricts various practical water solutions due to concerns about potential harm to living creatures."
That's not bad, either.